Feedback Examples

Not sure what written feedback from a writing consultation looks like?

These sample documents are based on typical student drafts at different stages of the writing process. Download to view the writing consultant’s comments and suggestions, designed to help the author develop their work.


Personal Statement Feedback Example


Research Paper Early Draft Example Feedback


CGRS M Proposal Example Feedback


Conference Abstract Example Feedback


Microfiction Example Feedback


*Sample documents were created by CWSC staff for teaching purposes.